Feedback on poster

I spoke to my teachers and peers about my poster and here is the feedback I received.

The Title needs to be changed. I thought that this particular title was effective and created enigmas about the film. However majority of the feedback insisted that the title is made similar to other comedy film posters as there is a lot going on with all the different colours.

My original title

title

Could be used

font

The credit block also needs to follow more conventions such as being in the middle. As it is on most comedy posters. Also it needs to be changed to white as my background colours are quite dark and you can see it very clearly.

My credit block

credit block

Credit block in white

white credit block

Furthermore I was also asked to make the poster without the blue and white background colours just to see what it would look like.

I personally thought that the cupcake was something that they would disagree with.